11/26/2006 5:13 PM
Gary wrote:
We should include the title of the book you have read before making any comments. Reply to this
11/27/2006 10:27 AM
jacob wrote:
some birthday A girl named Patricia thought her parents forgot her birthday. Then her dad thought of looking for a monster. Her cousin, brother, dad, and herself look for it. They find something and run, but it is their dad. Reply to this
11/27/2006 4:44 PM
Mr. N wrote:
Did she every have a B-day party? Did you like the book? Give me some more information. Reply to this
11/30/2006 8:46 AMspencer wrote:
I do not know cause I am reading the book next sorry that I could not give you any more information from your good friend Spencer Reply to this
11/29/2006 11:40 AM
Baylee wrote:
Some Birthday I liked the book. It was about a girl on her birthday and her dad forgot about it. Her Dad was coler blind.In the middle of the story her Dad took her,her brother,and her cousin to the haunted clay pit. Reply to this
11/30/2006 8:43 AM
Mr. Lee wrote:
I read this book! It made me remember that time I fell in a lake. Don't tell anyone about that. It's a little embarassing. Reply to this
11/30/2006 8:49 AM
Spencer wrote:
Hi Mr.Lee I am reading a very interesting book on Patrica Poloco I have read 6 boooks the one I am reading know is Chicken Sunday
11/27/2006 10:28 AM
warren wrote:
Boat Ride With Lillian Two Blossom It was great. It was about a little girl who asked her brother a question. Then a woman comes out of the woods to answer her questions. Reply to this
11/27/2006 4:47 PM
Mr. N wrote:
What else happened? Did the woman do anything else, what did they do when the woman came out of the woods? Reply to this
11/27/2006 10:52 AM
Kailey wrote:
The Keeping Quilt. It is all about her ancestors coming to America .They made a quilt.They pass it on from generation to generation .It is a really good story about family.It tells all the way from her Great Grandma to her being born and even her kids being born.It tells all about weddings back then and that at them men and women could not dance together.Later on it tells how they thought that when you die how you go to heaven .They would pray for that person and they thought that there prayers would left them to heaven.It is a supper good book.I love it. Reply to this
11/27/2006 4:50 PM
Mr. N wrote:
Great comments Kailey. I love your detail. I do have one suggestion. Before you begin a new sentence place a space after the period. Good job :{) Reply to this
11/27/2006 10:54 AM
Kailey wrote:
The Keeping Quilt. It is all about her ansister coming to America .They made a quilt.They pass it on from generation to generation .It is a realy good story about faimly.It tells all the way from her Great Grandma to her being born and even her kids being born.It tells all about weddings back then and that at them men and wemen could not dance together.Later on it tells how they thought that when you die how you go to heaven .They would pray for that person and they thought that there prayers would left them to heaven.It is a supper good book.I love it. Reply to this
11/27/2006 1:37 PM
Braydon wrote:
Some Birthday Patricia birthday was that her dad forgot then that night they went to the hunted clay pit. They camped there that night there was something big was there It smelled bad . I was her dad. Reply to this
11/27/2006 4:53 PM
Mr. N wrote:
Braydon, please re-read your comments before posting. Some of your sentences do not make any sense. What else happened in the story? Reply to this
11/27/2006 2:04 PM
Hailey Montana wrote:
Thunder Cake's At Patricia's grandmother's house in Michigan it was thundering and she was scared of thunder. She called her grandmother [babushka]. Her grandmother came from Russia a storm coming Patricia hid under the bed her grandmother told her to come out so she came out and gave her grandmother a big hug her grandmother said don't be scared it's just a thunder storm the storm got closer and closer they were going to make thunder cake's so they went in to the kitchen and maid the thunder cake's so they waited and waited for the thunder cake's to get finished then they enjoyed the thunder cake's i guess the thunder cake's were good because it looked liked they liked it it was covered with chocolate and had fresh cut strawberry's Reply to this
11/27/2006 4:56 PM
Mr. N wrote:
Hailey, you have a lot of detail but not much punctuation. Please pay attention to your sentence structure. You only have 2 periods in this big paragraph. Reply to this
11/30/2006 8:46 AM
Mr. Lee wrote:
If there is one thing I am afraid of, it is thunder! Do you have the recipe for that cake? Maybe it could help me. Reply to this
11/27/2006 2:12 PM
Hailey Montana wrote:
Thunder Cake's At Patricia's grandmother's house in michigan it was thundering and she was scared of thunder. She called her grandmother [babushka]. Her grandmother came from russia a storm comming Patricia hid under the bed her grandmother told her to come out so she came out and gave her grandmother a big hug her grandmother said don't be scared it's just a thunder storm the storm got closer and closer they were going to make thunder cake's so they went in to the kithen and maid the thunder cake's so they waited and waited for the thunder cake's to get finished then they enjoyed the thunder cake's i gess the thunder cake's were good because it looked liked they liked it it was coverd with choclate and had fresh cut strawberry's. Reply to this
11/27/2006 2:17 PM
jennifer wrote:
The Bee Tree The Bee Tree is about this girl and her grandpa. She got bored of reading with her grandpa so she tells him she wants to go out side and play he said you know what lets go find a bee tree and getsome delicious honey the first got five bees than they let one go and ran after it people added on to her and her grandpa the fist bee flew out of site the next one they had out had flew away also the next one took them farther then it flew away like the other one the next one took them way farther than the last one that they had lost the last one they had lost two but someone and it was a GIRL it was in the woods when thay walked in the woods they saw a big giant bee tree in the middle of the woods it had lots of dealicious honey in it they had a baby with there mother come and they used the babys dipers that the mom brung to hold the honey in.before they got the honey they had to smoke it out before they got the honey Reply to this
11/27/2006 4:58 PM
Mr. N wrote:
Jennifer, it looks like a lot of detail, but I cannot read it without periods. Where do the sentences start and stop. Please re-write with punctuation. Reply to this
11/27/2006 2:21 PM
Meranda wrote:
Thunder Cakes. The book was really good. Patricia was really scared of thunder. Patricia observed the thunder and how many miles away the thunderstorm was. They had to gather eggs,milk,chocolate,strawberries, over ripe tomato and butter. They tried to get the cake finished in time. Reply to this
11/28/2006 10:41 AM
Colton wrote:
When Lightning Comes in a Jar They're planning to have a family reunion and she asks what their going to do and her Gramma says everything that we did last time except for catch lightning in a jar. Reply to this
11/30/2006 8:51 AM
Mr. Lee wrote:
I thought this book was really sad at the end when the author is talking about how her Grandparents have all passed away. I didn't really cry, but there was a piece of dust that got in my eye and made it water. Reply to this
11/28/2006 10:41 AMKelsey wrote:
Some Birthday It was about her dad's birthday and his dad forgot his birthday. So they went to a haunted place called Clay Pitt. They say that it is the scariest place in the world but its not. Waverly Hills is the scariest place in the world people have gotten hung there and they have a TV show called Waverly Hills and its very very scary! Reply to this
11/28/2006 10:42 AMkailey wrote:
Some b-day She thought that her dad forgot her b-day but he did not forget her b-day he was just playing a jock on her.When they got back from te creek he gave her a present and a cake from her grandma.Her present did not match because her dad picked it not and he is color blind. Reply to this
11/28/2006 10:43 AM
warren wrote:
Thunder cake They had to make a thunder cake.The child was scared.They had made a cake and the storm. Reply to this
11/28/2006 10:44 AMholly wrote:
some birthday:it was a girl's birthday and she thinks her dad forgot her b-day.But he did notbecause he was going to take her to the clay pit that is a scary place and he was going to give her present to her when they went home. Reply to this
11/28/2006 11:07 AM
jennifer wrote:
My Ol Man My Ol Man is about Patricia Polocco and her brother named Ritchie.Every day there dad come to visit them after work.there dad always has a stories for them.His stories is about a manic rock they find it by a pond he gets fired and has to sale some things at the end there dad gets a job at the radio station. Because he wrote a stories on the magic rock. Reply to this
11/28/2006 10:45 AM
Shelby wrote:
Christmas Tapestry The Weeks family were moved to Detroit. The son was not very happy about moving.They met an old lady and reunited her with her family. Reply to this
11/30/2006 8:53 AM
Mr. Lee wrote:
I thought this book was a little boring at first, but it had a GREAT ending! Reply to this
11/28/2006 10:45 AM
lauren wrote:
THE KEEPING QUILT Great grandma made a quilt to remind them of there home when they moved from there home to NEW York. The quilt was past on for generations. Reply to this
11/28/2006 10:49 AM
Braydon wrote:
Mrs. Katz and Tush Some one gave her a kitten. She named it tush . Every body said the cat was ugly. She did not think thatcat was ugly she thought the cat wAs cute Reply to this
11/28/2006 10:51 AM
Jacob wrote:
Thunder Cake It is about a girl who over comes her fear of thunder by making a cake. First, she gets eggs from mean Nelie peck hen. Next she got milk from kick cow. Then, she got choco, sugar, and flour from a dry shed. Finaly, she gets tomatoes and strawberries and then she bakes the cake. Reply to this
11/28/2006 10:52 AM
Shelby wrote:
Mrs.Katz and Tush Mrs.Katz Husband died so Larnel gave her a kitten that had no tail so she named it Tush.Tush got out but they found her.Tush had kITTENS. Reply to this
11/28/2006 10:54 AM
Anonymous wrote:
Thank you Mr.Falker was a great book it was really rude how all those people were teasing her and making her missrible I know how this situation feels because my brother was mean to me about that kind of stuff. It was great to hear Patrica meat Mr.Falker again Reply to this
11/28/2006 10:55 AM
Logan wrote:
The Bee Tree Mary Ellen went outside with her grandpa to cach a bee to lead to there bee tree.Then they had to chase the bee then her grandma and her baby sister.Then a goose that lived at there pond came with them.Then they ran by a biker then he followed them.then they ran by a pary of sisters then they came. Thenthey ran by people with car troulb then they came.Then they ran by three travelers then they got swep away in all of them. then they finaly fount the bee tree and they all got some hony. Reply to this
11/28/2006 10:56 AM
Cameron wrote:
Thankyou Mr. Falker it was good. Trisha couldn't read so everyone laughed at her. When she got in fifth grade her teacher started to her help alot and when she messed up people laughed so Mr. Falker got mad at them. Half way though the year she learned to read. Reply to this
Was about a girl that thinks every one forgot about her Birthday. Then her and her family went to a hunted lake. After that they gave her a surprise Birthday. Reply to this
11/28/2006 10:58 AM
Anonymous wrote:
Mr. Lincon's Way Eugene Esterhause [or Mean Gene]is becoming A bully. Mr. Lincon was helping the fifth grade plant a tree in the beautiful new autrium. Eugene changed. Reply to this
11/28/2006 11:00 AM
Shelby wrote:
Welcome Comfort Comfort a chubby boy got teased and didn't belive in santa until a janator makes him belive.it turned out the janator was santa. Then he let Comfort be santa. Reply to this
11/28/2006 11:00 AM
dallas wrote:
MY ROOTEN RED HEADED OLDER BROTHER I like the book beacuse it was very interesting to read and funy. Reply to this
11/28/2006 11:02 AMLauren wrote:
MRS.KATZ and TUSH It was about a boy and he gave a cat with no tail she was the the runt no one wanted her. She gave her to an old lady hows husband had died. Reply to this
11/28/2006 11:02 AM
MIKE wrote:
MRS.KATZ AND TUSH Tush is a cat that got it's name because all you could see was it's tush. Mrs.Katz needed to have a friend for a Holiday and she did. Reply to this
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